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Dni483 Posted 11 years ago
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Hi everyone, can anyone look at this quickly and help me come up with a good idea for a comment to support my website on a social website, thank you in advance !

It would be nice of you if you could have a quick look at my current website that was designed not a long ago!
Any suggestions and comments would be appreciated ..
  

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Dni483 It would be nice of you if you could have a quick look at my current website that was designed not a long ago! It would be nice if you could have a quick look at a website that I recently designed. CJ

— CalifJim

  • Dni483 It would be nice of you if you could have a quick look at my current website that was designed not a long ago!
  • It would be nice if you could have a quick look at a website that I recently designed.
  • CJ
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Dni483It would be nice of you if you could have a quick look at my current website that was designed not a long ago!
It would be nice if you could have a quick look at a website that I recently designed.

CJ
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Or: "It would be appreciated..."

(The word "nice" is over-used; "appreciated" better describes how you feel as a result of someone having a quick look at your website).
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