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Saf Shah Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Hi everybody! I've rewritten a sentence below every sentence to avoid repetition....Please if it's grammatically not correct or my method of repetition is not correct, make it correct or mark the mistakes.Please.
Jane enjoyed going to the movies and her sister also enjoyed going to the movies.
Jane enjoyed going to the movies and her sister also did.
I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop and the shoes I bought last week were especially good.
I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop and the one I bought last week were especially good.
Joe invited me to go to Australia with him but I told him I did not want to go to Australia.
Joe invited me to go to Australia with him but I told him I don't want.
My neighbour always shares with us the food she cooks. Yesterday, she shared with us the food shecooked again and it tasted fantastic.
My neighbour always shares with us the food she cooks. Yesterday, she shared again and it tasted fantastic.
Jane believes that the legislation for minimum wage is bad to the economy but Joe thinks that the legislation for minimum wage can be good to the economy.
Jane believes that the legislation for minimum wage is bad to the economy but Joe thinks it can be good.
Jane enjoyed going to the movies and her sister also did.
I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop and the shoes I bought last week were especially good.
I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop and the one I bought last week were especially good.
Joe invited me to go to Australia with him but I told him I did not want to go to Australia.
Joe invited me to go to Australia with him but I told him I don't want.
My neighbour always shares with us the food she cooks. Yesterday, she shared with us the food shecooked again and it tasted fantastic.
My neighbour always shares with us the food she cooks. Yesterday, she shared again and it tasted fantastic.
Jane believes that the legislation for minimum wage is bad to the economy but Joe thinks that the legislation for minimum wage can be good to the economy.
Jane believes that the legislation for minimum wage is bad to the economy but Joe thinks it can be good.
Top answer
Hi, Saf Shah, Jane enjoyed going to the movies , and so did her sister. ) I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop , and the ones I bought last week were especially good. ] Jane believes that the legislation for minimum wage is bad for the economy , but Joe thinks it can be good.
- Hi, Saf Shah, Jane enjoyed going to the movies , and so did her sister.
- ) I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop , and the ones I bought last week were especially good.
- ] Jane believes that the legislation for minimum wage is bad for the economy , but Joe thinks it can be good.
- Note the commas.
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Hi, Saf Shah,
Jane enjoyed going to the movies, and so did her sister. (Yours is not wrong, but this is more natural.)
I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop, and the ones I bought last week were especially good.
Joe invited me to go to Australia with him, but I [told him I didn’t want to g
Jane enjoyed going to the movies, and so did her sister. (Yours is not wrong, but this is more natural.)
I have bought a lot of shoes in this shop, and the ones I bought last week were especially good.
Joe invited me to go to Australia with him, but I [told him I didn’t want to g
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