Hi, Could you please correct the sentences below.because I badly need it tomorrow morning. thank you :)

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Please help me to find the mistakes in the sentences below and please explain why the sentence is wrong, and how to write them in correct ones.

1. He asked more money.

2. We appreciate you for your kindness.

3. He was absent for a business trip.

4. See you next morning.

5. The result is satisfied.

6. It is not allowed to smoked here.

7. I'll marry you in case you stop smoking.

8. She was dead from a traffic acccident.

9. I have difficulty to persuade her.

10. I'm learning to drive a car.

11. The cost is expensive.

12. Most of people are afraid of death.

13. The department store is attracting a lot of clients by lowering prices.

14. The company is very incompetent in the fast-food market.

15. He became mad when he heard the news.

16. I don't know he is honest.

17. He didn't mind to show me the way to the hotel.

18. Did you go to swim yesterday?

19. He's busy to read books.

20. They're doing their best to search missing people in the accident.

-please help me..i'll wait for the answers. thank you..

Cool Breeze · Accepted Answer

We don't do students' homework here. Please write your own suggestions and someone will check them. Mind you, not all the sentences have mistakes.

CB

Milanino · Answer

hi , i will try to help you as much as i know :

1. He asked(for)more money: because we use "FOR" after the verb "to ask" it's "to ask for something".

2. We appreciate you for your kindness: i think this sentence is correct grammatically but we say "we appreciate your kindness" when we talk in real.

5. The result is satisfied:this sentences seems senseless for me because a result can not be said satisfied, it may be satisfying which means that the result satisfies some one.

6. It is not allowed to smoked here: it is not allowed to smoked here because with "to" we don't conjugate we just use the infinitive form.

8. She was dead from a traffic acccident: i think it's better to say : "she died in a (car or road) accident".

9. I have difficulty to persuade her: i think it's better to say "i have problems persuading her".

11. The cost is expensive: we can't say that "the cost" is "expensive" because the cost can be high but not expensive so we just say :"it is expensive".

16. I don't know (if) he is honest.

I hope that would help you

NB: i might miss some mistakes or even wrongly correct others.

Thanks

Cool Breeze · Answer

1. He asked for more money: because we use "FOR" after the verb "to ask" it's "to ask for something". Correct!

2. We appreciate you for your kindness: i think this sentence is correct grammatically but we say "we appreciate your kindness" when we talk in real. Correct!

5. The result is satisfied:this sentences seems senseless for me because a result can not be said satisfied, it may be satisfying which means that the result satisfies some one. Correct again! You could say: The result is satisfactory.

6. It is not allowed to smoked here: it is not allowed to smoked here because with "to" we don't conjugate we just use the infinitive form. Correct. Also: Smoking is not allowed here.

8. She was dead from a traffic acccident: i think it's better to say : "she died in a (car or road) accident". Correct!

9. I have difficulty to persuade her: i think it's better to say "i have problems persuading her". Also: I have difficulties in persuading her. Always capitalize I when it's a personal pronoun.

11. The cost is expensive: we can't say that "the cost" is "expensive" because the cost can be high but not expensive so we just say :"it is expensive". Correct!

16. I don't know if/whether he is honest. Correct!

CB

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