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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
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Hi. Could you help me with this about grammar. Thanks in advance
Happen that I wrote a composition about the technology nowdays. Could you check my grammar, please? Thanks in advance.
Technology.
Nowdays the technology has changed the way we live. Most people say the technology makes our lives more comfortable and very convenient. But i'm not sure about that, in my opinion, we spend less time a week having meaningful conversations with our family. For example, I interact with my Laptop for 8-10 hours a day because I find a lot of things to do and I can't stop, It lets me know what is happening in the world, also download free music or make a meeting with people from others countries. The fact is that It is also made me feel alone many times. Finally, we have to use the different electronic equipments correctly to get a healthy social life. Technology has made my life different.
I hope you could help me. Thanks
Technology.
Nowdays the technology has changed the way we live. Most people say the technology makes our lives more comfortable and very convenient. But i'm not sure about that, in my opinion, we spend less time a week having meaningful conversations with our family. For example, I interact with my Laptop for 8-10 hours a day because I find a lot of things to do and I can't stop, It lets me know what is happening in the world, also download free music or make a meeting with people from others countries. The fact is that It is also made me feel alone many times. Finally, we have to use the different electronic equipments correctly to get a healthy social life. Technology has made my life different.
I hope you could help me. Thanks
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Nowdays the Technology has changed the way we live. Most people say that technology makes our lives more comfortable and very convenient. But i'm not sure about tha t.
- Nowdays the Technology has changed the way we live.
- Most people say that technology makes our lives more comfortable and very convenient.
- But i'm not sure about tha t.
- I n my opinion, we spend less time a week having meaningful conversations with our family.
- For example, I interact with my l aptop for 8-10 hours a day because I find a lot of things to do and I can't stop, It lets me know what is happening in the world .
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