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Claire moon Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Hi, could you check if I grammatical mistakes here?
Hi. I'm not a native English speaker, so I need some help from native speakers!
It's actually a summary.
Please let me know if I have any grammatical mistakes or made wrong word choices, and if you could please correct them! Thank you very much
Contrary to the general perception, highly intelligent children sometimes don't do well in school. If these gifted children are not understood, thus led to a wrong direction, it's very likely they will fail academically.
As a result, they don't get much recognition they deserve, and the stress that comes from all these worrisome eyes make them develop behavioral problems.
It's actually a summary.
Please let me know if I have any grammatical mistakes or made wrong word choices, and if you could please correct them! Thank you very much
Contrary to the general perception, highly intelligent children sometimes don't do well in school. If these gifted children are not understood, thus led to a wrong direction, it's very likely they will fail academically.
As a result, they don't get much recognition they deserve, and the stress that comes from all these worrisome eyes make them develop behavioral problems.
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Claire, I'd say "as much recognition as they deserve" or "the recognition they deserve". I'd also put and before thus. The rest seems fine to me.
- Claire, I'd say "as much recognition as they deserve" or "the recognition they deserve".
- I'd also put and before thus.
- The rest seems fine to me.
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Claire, I'd say "as much recognition as they deserve" or "the recognition they deserve". I'd also put and before thus. The rest seems fine to me.
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Thank you^^
You are English speaker right?
You think that the part " the children are understood" is ok?
I was worried if that doesn't make sense.
I wanted to say that if the gifted children are not understood by people like teachers.
So it makes sense?
You are English speaker right?
You think that the part " the children are understood" is ok?
I was worried if that doesn't make sense.
I wanted to say that if the gifted children are not understood by people like teachers.
So it makes sense?
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Contrary to the general perception, highly intelligent children sometimes do not do well in school. If these gifted children are not understood and are thus led in the wrong direction,
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