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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
No one can argue with how fast science progress and the numerous discovers and break through that it achieved. With science progression, technology never stops to improve and introduce new inventions and applications that make life easier.
These new inventions and applications make us able to connect with each other easier and in a better way. And these allowed us to use same products and goods all over the world. As a result we started to share same interests and habits which will lead us to have the same culture eventually.
Modern technology presents to us many new inventions and applications that help us greatly and improve our connection with different people from different places and cultures. Nowadays, you can speak or chat with someone from the other side of this planet while you are sitting in your room. And you also can know everything that goes all over the world without even going out of your house. Moreover, you can go to USA from China in a few hours which was a journey that took months and yeas in the past days. Nowadays, distance becomes no more an obstacle between people and the new inventions shortened the time need to travel from one place to another and that helped greatly to connect people together.
Modern technology presents lots of goods and products that make our life easier and since people are more connect together than before, and travel doesn't need that long time as it used to need, and lots of obstacles disappeared. It becomes normal to see international products and goods that invade all the world and spread in a fast way in all the countries with different cultures. For example; computers and mobiles.
As a result of enhancing means of connections between people from different places and cultures, and by sharing the same products and goods these lead to a new life style. A life style that has many things in common and which creates many common habits that people share.
At the end, Modern technology worked on removing obstacles between different cultures. And with more progression that science achieves, more obstacles will be removed and people will get closer. As a result cultures will get closer until they become one single culture and the world becomes a one small village.
No one can argue with how fast science progress and the numerous discovers and break through that it achieved. With science progression, technology never stops to improve and introduce new inventions and applications that make life easier.
These new inventions and applications make us able to connect with each other easier and in a better way. And these allowed us to use same products and goods all over the world. As a result we started to share same interests and habits which will lead us to have the same culture eventually.
Modern technology presents to us many new inventions and applications that help us greatly and improve our connection with different people from different places and cultures. Nowadays, you can speak or chat with someone from the other side of this planet while you are sitting in your room. And you also can know everything that goes all over the world without even going out of your house. Moreover, you can go to USA from China in a few hours which was a journey that took months and yeas in the past days. Nowadays, distance becomes no more an obstacle between people and the new inventions shortened the time need to travel from one place to another and that helped greatly to connect people together.
Modern technology presents lots of goods and products that make our life easier and since people are more connect together than before, and travel doesn't need that long time as it used to need, and lots of obstacles disappeared. It becomes normal to see international products and goods that invade all the world and spread in a fast way in all the countries with different cultures. For example; computers and mobiles.
As a result of enhancing means of connections between people from different places and cultures, and by sharing the same products and goods these lead to a new life style. A life style that has many things in common and which creates many common habits that people share.
At the end, Modern technology worked on removing obstacles between different cultures. And with more progression that science achieves, more obstacles will be removed and people will get closer. As a result cultures will get closer until they become one single culture and the world becomes a one small village.
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No one can argue with how fast science progresses and the numerous discoveries and breakthroughs that it has achieved. With the progress of science, technology never stops to improve and introduce new inventions and applications that make life easier. These new inventions and applications enable us to connect with each other easier and in a better ways.
- No one can argue with how fast science progresses and the numerous discoveries and breakthroughs that it has achieved.
- With the progress of science, technology never stops to improve and introduce new inventions and applications that make life easier.
- These new inventions and applications enable us to connect with each other easier and in a better ways.
- This has allowed us to use the same products and goods all over the world.
- As a result we have started to share the same interests and habits which will lead us to have the same culture eventually.
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No one can argue with how fast science progresses and the numerous discoveries and breakthroughs that it has achieved. With the progress of science, technology never stops to improve and introduce new inventions and applications that make life easier.
These new inventions and applications enable us to connect with each other easier and in a better ways. This has allowed us to use the same
These new inventions and applications enable us to connect with each other easier and in a better ways. This has allowed us to use the same
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