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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Hi, could someone correct me pls

i'll wander forever til i find you again

thanks..
  

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Hi, it sounds like you are writing some sort of poem or other literary art form about love, correct? If so, I would suggest either of of the following- I'll be a wandering soul until I meet up with you again. I'll wander forever in the sea of love if we never meet again.

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  • Hi, it sounds like you are writing some sort of poem or other literary art form about love, correct?
  • If so, I would suggest either of of the following- I'll be a wandering soul until I meet up with you again.
  • I'll wander forever in the sea of love if we never meet again.
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Hi, it sounds like you are writing some sort of poem or other literary art form about love, correct? If so, I would suggest either of of the following-

I'll be a wandering soul until I meet up with you again.
I'll wander forever in the sea of love if we never meet again.

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The sentence is a complex sentence. The subordinate clause "til i find you again” is an adverb clause of time.



“Till” is the correct spelling though “til” (old English) may be used in ways as suggested by AliceW31. It may be confused with the meaning of “tilde”, the diacritical mark ‘~’. “Until” is considered more formal than “till” and is used at the beginning of sentences.
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