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Dear Mrs ........,

I have been following you and your husband on Instagram since three weeks ago. After reading all your posts and your biographies , I'm truly impressed with your positive attitude. You are such an amazing couple who deeply inspire me everyday to follow my dreams and never give up.

I’m living in the Netherlands and I’m studying Business Administration at Rotterdam University. I’m very interested in fashion, hair and beauty industry. During browsing the XXXX.com I have noticed it is difficult for the consumers who don't live in the US to choose the right color/size of hair extensions. I thought it would be great if your products be available in the Netherlands so the consumers can touch you hair extension and be sure they pick the right color or try your Ceramic Curling Iron on their hair. That is why I came with the idea to write a marketing plan to introduce the XXXX products in the Netherlands as my thesis topic. Introducing your company to new regions is an important strategy for growing your business.

This marketing plan consist a market research in which I will describe and analyze potential customers (who they are and what makes them buy XXXX products) and also analyze the competitors and how you’ll position yourself to beat it. Finally I will provide you with the implementation of this marketing plan to show how the XXXX products would be introduce to the local market. In general this plan makes your business a success in the Netherlands. I would loved to write my thesis about your company. I have attached my cover letter and resume for your review.

Thank you for your time, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.