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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
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Hi, Could help to check my grammar?
Hello again. I did a composition about a past event and like result my teacher told me that is difficult to understand. Can help me to improve this little composition? thanks in advance 
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A memorable event in December
One of the most memorable moments in my life was when I had to go back home after 9 months away of my family.
It was a moment to remember for the rest of my life, because in the middle of nowhere the bus broke down and I had to wait a whole day for another bus of the same company, which will take us back home.
But was in that day lost that I met a little boy who shares with me his food and his friendship. He was travelling alone, I'm not talkative, but he didn't stop to talk and suddenly he was there, inventing a funny joke. Now that I'm remembering this, I never asked him his name, but I remember a ittle boy who makes (my teacher say that makes is just make? Can teach me why? thanks in advance) me smile in December.
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.A memorable event in December
One of the most memorable moments in my life was when I had to go back home after 9 months away of my family.
It was a moment to remember for the rest of my life, because in the middle of nowhere the bus broke down and I had to wait a whole day for another bus of the same company, which will take us back home.
But was in that day lost that I met a little boy who shares with me his food and his friendship. He was travelling alone, I'm not talkative, but he didn't stop to talk and suddenly he was there, inventing a funny joke. Now that I'm remembering this, I never asked him his name, but I remember a ittle boy who makes (my teacher say that makes is just make? Can teach me why? thanks in advance) me smile in December.
Note: I love this website
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Those are the moment to remember for the rest of my life, because in the middle of nowhere the bus I was travelling, broke down and I had to wait a whole day for another bus of the same company, which would take us back home. While I was feeling lost, I met a little boy who shared his food with me. He seemed warm and friendly.
- Those are the moment to remember for the rest of my life, because in the middle of nowhere the bus I was travelling, broke down and I had to wait a whole day for another bus of the same company, which would take us back home.
- While I was feeling lost, I met a little boy who shared his food with me.
- He seemed warm and friendly.
- He was travelling alone.
- I'm not talkative , but he didn't stop talking, and suddenly he invented a funny joke was inventing funny jokes.
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A memorable event in December One of the most memorable moments in my life was when I was returning home after being away for 9 months.Those are the moment to remember for the rest of my life, because in the middle of now
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