Hi, could help me to correct my motivation letter?
0hello,02br 02br 00i am doing some motivation letter and i am not a native english speaking, so just so terrify to do errors...could you help me?02br 02br 00thanks in advance, 02br 02br 00here the letter:02br 02br 00Dear00 00Mrs ...02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Re : 00work00 placement02br 02br 02br 02br 00I have seen your announcement in the " name" website I hope that it is still valuable.02br 02br 00I have the desire to work in 010200 especially in an international firm and would be particularly pleased to have some training in your firm. I studied biology in 010200 in a bilingual university (French-German) and I have a strong desire to perfect my German as well to provide a reorientation of my occupation.02br 02br 02br 02br 00Study of Biology and the professional records that I have done later, give me a spirit of synthesis, the skill of analysis, and the ability to manage my own experiments as well as my work time. During my study and after them I have also done some placements and trips aboard that provide me an open mind and a capacity of integration in a new environment, and a real flexibility at work. 00 00I also worked during my study that has improved my sense of organisation between my study and my jobs.02br 02br 02br 02br 00Despite the fact that I liked studying biology, field that gave me many interesting skills, the laboratory research does not satisfy me in totally and I am looking for something more suitable with my personality and my desire of work in contact with people in an international firm.02br 02br 02br 02br 00Being an optimistic and creative team player with very good presentation skills and a wide range of interests, I am also able to work self-contained. Not only personal strengths in analytical thinking, problem solving and identifying the determining factors of success, but also very good communication skills and a strong ability of integration make me feel being the right person for this internship02br 02br 02br 02br 00A placement in your firm would enable me to perfect my German but also to gain the knowledge of a work in Public Relation which I need to specialize.02br 02br 02br 02br 00I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm and would like to start as soon as possible.00 00I will do my utmost to give you satisfaction.02br 02br 00If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me by phone or email.02br 02br 02br 02br 00Yours faithfully02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00PS: Please find attached my Curriculum Vitae 0-
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