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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Hi. Could anyone proofread this for me?

I wrote this for my friend. I would appreciate if anyone of you would proofread this. Thanks. Emotion: smile

Drawing pens, if seen, will remind you of this amazing person who posesses good talents in art. He may not be the heart of the class, but when it comes to handling things, whether complicated or untroublesome, he may be the first in the list. Ocassionally, he gets annoyed at things, but seemingly every deeds has every reason. In times of problems, he may lend you a hand, may guide you through the right way, and may give you satisfaction. When somebody goes diverting, this guy will never fail to amuse. The only thing that seems bothering is his sensitivity towards others. Giving praises, <name of a person> accepts his companions not only as friends, but also as fellowship.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: Drawing pens, if seen, will remind you of this amazing person who posesses good talents in art. He may not be the heart of the class , but when it comes to handling things, whether complicated or untroublesome , he may be the first in the list. Ocassionally , he gets annoyed at things, but seemingly every deeds has every reason.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas: Drawing pens, if seen, will remind you of this amazing person who posesses good talents in art.
  • He may not be the heart of the class , but when it comes to handling things, whether complicated or untroublesome , he may be the first in the list.
  • Ocassionally , he gets annoyed at things, but seemingly every deeds has every reason.
  • In times of problems , he may lend you a hand, may guide you through the right way, and may give you satisfaction .
  • When somebody goes diverting , this guy will never fail to amuse.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

Drawing pens, if seen, will remind you of this amazing person who posesses good talents in art. He may not be the heart of the class, but when it comes to handling things, whether complicated or untroublesome, he may be the first in the list. Ocassionally, he gets annoyed at things, but seemingly e
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Drawing pens, if seen, will remind you of this amazing person who carries good capability in art. He may not be genius in the class, but when it comes to handling things, whether complicated or not, he may be the first on the list. Ocasionally, he gets annoyed at things, but seemingly every deeds has e
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You'd better start again on most of them. Here are some hints:

posesses -- spelling
talents -- number (should be singular)
the heart of the class -- word choice; your correction is OK, but 'the genius'
untroublesome, -- word choice; your correction is OK
in -- wrong preposition; your correction is c
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Drawing pens, if seen, will remind you of this amazing person who possesses good talent in art. He may not be the genius in the class, but when it comes to handling things, whether complicated or not, he may be the first on the list. Ocasionally, he gets annoyed at things, but seemingly every deed has a reason. If you have a problem, you'd better consult this guy since he may lend you a hand, m
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Drawing pens will remind you of this amazingly artistic person. He may not be his class genius, but when it comes to handling things, complicated or not, he is at the top of the list. Occasionally, he gets annoyed, but every deed has a reason. If you have a problem, consult this fellow, and he may lend you a hand, may guide
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