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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Hi correct & help me this letter

Hi I am Jenifer from Tamilnadu (India) My mother Tongue is Tamil so I'm not having enough knowledge in English...

Now I'm working as a Teacher in School ,There my Principal ask me to write a letter to get 8 Mat from one person... (I write the following but he rejected & ask me write again...So I'm asking here.... Please help me immediately

I write the follwoing...

Respected Sir,
Greeting! We are expecting your urgent help to get 8 mats for Our School childrens , Please arrange me as soon as possible,

Thank you

Note : Please write with your own sentece related to this matter (No need to correct only mistakes)
Also if you want to add anymore words please add....

Advanced Thanks.
  

Top answer

Had this person previously agreed to donate the mats? Or sell them to you? Did you have a reason to expect them, based on a prior promise?

  • Had this person previously agreed to donate the mats?
  • Or sell them to you?
  • Did you have a reason to expect them, based on a prior promise?
  • Are you simply asking him to give them to you as a gift?
  • Does this person have a child who attends the school?
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Had this person previously agreed to donate the mats? Or sell them to you? Did you have a reason to expect them, based on a prior promise?

Are you simply asking him to give them to you as a gift?

Does this person have a child who attends the school? What would he see as the benefit to him? Why should he care about how it benefits the children?

Simply saying "arrange to
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Hi thanks for quick reply,
The person is Head of our Educational Trust , He will do immediate but we want intimate this requirement to him...

Please help me how to write him

Advanced Thanks..
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Write what you would say to him if you were talking to him on the phone explaining how his generosity will benefit the children.
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Grammar GeekWrite what you would say to him if you were talking to him on the phone explaining how his generosity will benefit the children.
Hello Sir Goodmorning , We are calling from ...... School. your previous helps are very useful for us.. Now our childrens are sitting with out mat in classroom we are required 8 mats urgently please arrange the needful as
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Dear Sir;

Thank you so much for your generosity in the past. We have another situation in my classroom that I would like to bring to your kind attention.
I have eight wonderful children who have to sit on the hard floor. They are very uncomfortable and it is difficult for them to learn. They would love to have soft mats to sit on. Could you please provide my eight children with one

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