Hi, Can you help me with this journal (Grammer chek)

HI
If anyone can help me and chek the grammer error I did.
My journal is about to talk about my self, so its not a grammer home work.
I just to be sure that the instructor understand me!!



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My name is “””””, I’m 28 years old, born in Baghdad, Iraq and raised between Iraq, Jordan, and Romania. My marriage was in 2006, I have a child two years old. I finished my high school in Iraq, and after high school I started my higher education in computer science, but I quite after three years because of the war started in 2003. Because of my passion in computer I decided to finish what I started her in America During the period of my life I passed more than three wars, and one of them lasted more than 8 years, as well as the economic blockade lasted more than 12 years of devastating the country. The devastating siege and deprived the people of the basics of life and isolated from the world, so we decided to travel to Jordan, and then to Romania where I lived about 5 years. My life in Romania was very beautiful, because of financial problems we had to return to Iraq in 1998 where I finished my high school. In 2003 was a big change in my life and the lives of Iraqi people in general, after the devastating war. I decided to leave the university and work with my father we've created a construction company. The first projects that we made were with the U.S. Army in Iraq. During the short period we have achieved great success, the profits exceeded one million dollars. There was a dream come true and can be completed easily, The end of 2004 was not expected, as was my father returning from work some terrorist groups kidnapped him and they took about 600 thousand dollar to release him. This made us go back to zero again, because of the continuing threat of terrorist groups we have decided to return to Jordan. In Jordan I suffered a lot because I did not carry residence card which allow me living and working in Jordan, so I decided to start a new journey, to come to America as a refugee. Until today, I’m building my life step by step and I hope that no new things come to change my life again and make me start from the beginning. Because I don’t like to give up, but I’m really tired to start over again and again. I have family to take care of, so I don’t have time to start from the beginning again.

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