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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Hi, can you help me with this

Hi, I would appreciate if you would check if this is grammatically correct.

Just arrived/walked in/entered, he comes up to the counter and takes seat a stool away from her.

Which of arrived/walked in/entered is the best choice when the location is a bar?

  

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anonymous Which of arrived/walked in/entered is the best choice when the location is a bar? Your sentence structure and word choice are weak. He walks in and takes a seat at the bar a stool away from her.

— Mister Micawber

  • anonymous Which of arrived/walked in/entered is the best choice when the location is a bar?
  • Your sentence structure and word choice are weak.
  • He walks in and takes a seat at the bar a stool away from her.
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anonymousWhich of arrived/walked in/entered is the best choice when the location is a bar?

Your sentence structure and word choice are weak.

He walks in and takes a seat at the bar a stool away from her.

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