hi can you edit my introduction paragraph on the topic "effects on divorce children"

“When mom and dad went to war the only person they took was the children.” The society we live in now has many divorces between married couples. This made the children experience the broken relationship or separation of their parents. Divorce makes your child’s life way harder than it is and it implies many disturbances to their life. Divorce comes with many consequences; these children would be affected in a variety of ways, physically and emotionally. Divorce on children could cause negative effects. Such as: the child having lower self-esteem, having learning problems, and they could even be more aggressive and angry. Depending on how the child has been affected by the divorce; these effects could either be short term or long term.