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The subject psychology has always excited me in one way or another; rather it is how our mind functions or how other people interact with others. Out of curiosity, I chose to take Psych 1A as my first course in the JC. Since I am still a high school student and are concurrently enrolling in Casa Grande High school as a Junior, I do not know how well I would do, but I've always have high expectations for myself and am willing to try my hardest to be triumphant in this class. Psychology unlock many questions that craving for to explore. For example, the questions that we have discussed on the first day of class, why do we dream? Why do we think? How does our memory work? These are all the questions that I have been dying for to discover for its answer. Psychology would not only help me with understanding of each individual but also give me the opportunity to develop better critical thinking skills. I wanted to be able to use the knowledge that I absorb in this class to apply it into my relationships and problems in the future.
I am sure we all view the definition successful, differently. I myself, believe that academic successful does not only mean getting a accomplished letter grade, it involved putting effort in, understanding the knowledge you're receiving, and improving yourself. I am looking forward for a wonderful semester and am ready commit myself to this class.