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Dni483 Posted 11 years ago
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Hi Can anyone correct this message and perhaps write it better
•I started photographing objects belonging to my mother. This work aims to focus on tiredness and frustration through variety objects that used to belong to her symbolising comfort and self-confidence for instance the old make up left out for over 5 years. The hairy comb and the worn out bag with its deep creases and cleaning cloth coming out of the bag point out an exhausting character to be frustrated and yet drained.
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I started photographing objects belonging to my mother. This work aims to focus on tiredness and frustration through a variety of objects that used to belong to her . They symbolize comfort and self-confidence , for instance her old makeup (or make-up) (that she) left out for over 5 years.
- I started photographing objects belonging to my mother.
- This work aims to focus on tiredness and frustration through a variety of objects that used to belong to her .
- They symbolize comfort and self-confidence , for instance her old makeup (or make-up) (that she) left out for over 5 years.
- The hairy comb and the worn-out bag with its deep creases and the cleaning cloth coming out of the bag point to an exhaust ed character , frustrated and yet drained.
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I started photographing objects belonging to my mother. This work aims to focus on tiredness and frustration through a variety of objects that used to belong to her. They symbolize comfort and self-confidence, for instance her old makeup (or make-up) (that she) left out for over 5 years. The hairy comb and the worn-out bag with its deep creas
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I changed it. How about this?
I started photographing objects belonging to my mother. This work aims to focus on tiredness and frustration through a variety of objects that used to belong to her. They symbolise comfort and self-confidence. These objects such as the lipstick and the make up brush are now intact and full of dust and spoiled since their last use. The hairy comb and the wor
I started photographing objects belonging to my mother. This work aims to focus on tiredness and frustration through a variety of objects that used to belong to her. They symbolise comfort and self-confidence. These objects such as the lipstick and the make up brush are now intact and full of dust and spoiled since their last use. The hairy comb and the wor
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I started photographing objects belonging to my mother. This work aims to focus on tiredness and frustration through a variety of objects that used to belong to her. They symbolise comfort and self-confidence. These objects, such as the lipstick and the makeup brush, are now intact and full of dust and spoiled since their last use. The hairy comb and the worn-out bag with its
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