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Dani483 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Hi can anyone check this for me

I actually think is done well in terms of the lighting and the focusing as it is sharp and the quality looks good , usually the quality of the photos are not good on facebook but I love this one however you could have avoided that women in the background by cropping the photo also you should've taken it at a different place where there are no people.
  

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This is four sentences all jammed together into one. Such grammar error is called 'a run-on sentence'. Please try to rewrite it as four separate sentences.

— Clive

  • This is four sentences all jammed together into one.
  • Such grammar error is called 'a run-on sentence'.
  • Please try to rewrite it as four separate sentences.
  • Then I will be happy to check the rest of your grammar.
  • Clive
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This is four sentences all jammed together into one. Such grammar error is called 'a run-on sentence'.
Please try to rewrite it as four separate sentences. Then I will be happy to check the rest of your grammar.

Clive
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