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Dni483 Posted 12 years ago
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Hi can anyone check this for any grammar mistakes

For first time in the photography studio, I believe I did quite well with taking photographs by using the equipment within the studio.
  

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For first time in the photography studio, I believe I did quite well with taking photographs by using the equipment available there. )

  • For first time in the photography studio, I believe I did quite well with taking photographs by using the equipment available there.
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For first time in the photography studio, I believe I did quite well with taking photographs by using the equipment available there. ( 'Studio' has already been mentioned, so its repetition sounds a little odd to me.)

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