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Henrik_c Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Hi! Can anyone check my statement of purpose letter?

0Hello! Would someone please check the grammar and check if there are some strange sentences? Thank you very much! 02br
00My name is Henrik XXXXX and I am studying Business administration at the School of Economics and Management in XXXX. I’m at my sixth term and am soon going to take a university degree of Bachelor of Science in Business and Economics. My goal is to take my final university degree of Master of Science in Business and Economics with direction in marketing in the spring of 2009. I really enjoy study in XXXX but looking forward to go out to work and make practice of what I learned.02br
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00I always been interested in the possibility to study abroad and now is the perfect time for me to do so before I end my time here at XXXX University. I have many friends that have been studying abroad and their stories have been both inspiring and motivating. When I learned about ERASMUS exchange program through an information meeting held by representatives at my school I knew I would send in an application. 02br
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00I’ve studied French in both junior and senior high school but never got the chance to actually visit France for a longer period of time. Therefore a primary interest is to study in France next term to have an opportunity to practice my French and to learn the French culture. I would however like to follow the courses that are held in English.02br
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00When I was reading former exchange students travel stories about XXXX Business School in Nice. I was convinced that that would be my first choice. My impression of the school is that it is modern and has a good reputation. Of course, the French Riviera and the closeness to the Alps are also attracting. My second choice is either XXXX in Paris, which seems to be placed in a beautiful area of Paris, or XXXX. Both seem to be really nice schools. 02br
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00My main reason for studying abroad is to experience another culture and get to know how it is to live in a different country. I also hope I get to meet people from all around Europe as well as making new friends. Ultimately, I think studying abroad would make me more experienced and make me grow as a person.02br
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00Sincerely Yours02br
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00Henrik XXXXX0-
  

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00 I am in my sixth term00 and will earn a 00Bachelor of Science Degree in Business and Economics. My goal is to earn a Master of Science in Business and Economics Degree, with direction in marketing in Spring 2009. 02br 02br 00I have always been interested in the possibility of studying abroad and now is the perfect time for me to do so before I end my time here at *** University.

  • 00 I am in my sixth term00 and will earn a 00Bachelor of Science Degree in Business and Economics.
  • My goal is to earn a Master of Science in Business and Economics Degree, with direction in marketing in Spring 2009.
  • 02br 02br 00I have always been interested in the possibility of studying abroad and now is the perfect time for me to do so before I end my time here at *** University.
  • I have many friends that have been studying abroad and their stories have been both inspiring and motivating.
  • When I learned about ERASMUS exchange program through an information meeting held by representatives at my school, I knew I should send in an application.
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0My name is Henrik *** and I am studying Business Administration at the School of Economics and Management in ***.00 I am in my sixth term00 and will earn a 00Bachelor of Science Degree in Business and Economics. My goal is to earn a Master of Science in Business and Economics Degree, with direction in marketing in Spring 2009. I really enjoy studying in *** but look forward to enter

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