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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Hi, Can a teacher correct ?

Can you correct the sentences in relation to fish?

Hopefully you'll grow to love it's disabilities instead of culling it.

When feeding frozen food to your fish make sure you take out enough to feed right for that feeding,

Make sure you have a plant for your fish to oxygen.

You'd be amazed at what kinds of injuries fish can survive

Plants oxygen for the fish.

Can you give me a fish with the largest lifespan and that doesn't live in a lot of volume of water. The maximum volume of water it can live in is 10 gallons.

THANK YOU
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised text: Hopefully you'll grow to love it's disabilities instead of culling it. When feeding frozen food to your fis h m ake sure you take out enough to feed right for that feeding, Make sure you have a plant for your fish to oxygen .

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please correct them and post your revised text: Hopefully you'll grow to love it's disabilities instead of culling it.
  • When feeding frozen food to your fis h m ake sure you take out enough to feed right for that feeding, Make sure you have a plant for your fish to oxygen .
  • You'd be amazed at what kinds of injuries fish can survive Plants oxygen for the fish.
  • Can you give me a fish with the largest lifespan and that doesn't live in a lot of volume of wate r.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised text:

Hopefully you'll grow to love it's disabilities instead of culling it.

When feeding frozen food to your fish make sure you take out enough to feed right for that feeding,

Make sure you have a plant for your fish to oxygen.

You'd be amazed at w

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