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Chibi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Hi beloved members!
Could you please edit this piece of writing. Moreover, I have a question, how can I turn this free writing into narative writing - a kind of academic writing. Thank you very much!
Felling guilty!!!
It is really my fault not to prepare things carefully…
I chose a topic that I found very interesting and was engaged in. I worked fairly hard to find out the way to develop it as creativity as possible. At first, I tended to do a very simple research, so I did write down a very simple outline. But then, I found that the outline did not fulfill all my ideas. I spent time doing it again and again for a better one. Thanks to my supervisor’s comments and suggestions, the outline of my research has been much improved. It may not be perfect, but it seems okay with the topic. I cannot say that I have read a lot of books on the topic but some. I find them interesting and inspiring. Now I am able to start to write the first draft, I think.
However, one thing suddenly happened when I began to conduct a survey. I must admit that it was very difficult for me to accomplish the questionnaire for students and interview questions for teachers. At last, I could manage to deliver these things. Exactly at that time I found out the program in mainstream classes are totally different from the program in . It means that my survey has no population to cover and my research will be out of need. The only way to save the situation is to change the topic; however, the 19th of this month is the deadline for the first draft. Actually, I can negotiate with my supervisor to cancel it. Nevertheless, I feel so guilty because I took him so much time to read and comment on the outline again and again. I also took my friends time to do the trial questionnaire. After that, all were in no use. I must have been more careful check all the essential information before choosing a topic…
Certainly, I have to work harder now to find out a new topic and do research on it. It will take a lot of time. Moreover, I am not sure that I can hand in the research paper on time.
It is really a big lesson for me.
Felling guilty!!!
It is really my fault not to prepare things carefully…
I chose a topic that I found very interesting and was engaged in. I worked fairly hard to find out the way to develop it as creativity as possible. At first, I tended to do a very simple research, so I did write down a very simple outline. But then, I found that the outline did not fulfill all my ideas. I spent time doing it again and again for a better one. Thanks to my supervisor’s comments and suggestions, the outline of my research has been much improved. It may not be perfect, but it seems okay with the topic. I cannot say that I have read a lot of books on the topic but some. I find them interesting and inspiring. Now I am able to start to write the first draft, I think.
However, one thing suddenly happened when I began to conduct a survey. I must admit that it was very difficult for me to accomplish the questionnaire for students and interview questions for teachers. At last, I could manage to deliver these things. Exactly at that time I found out the program in mainstream classes are totally different from the program in . It means that my survey has no population to cover and my research will be out of need. The only way to save the situation is to change the topic; however, the 19th of this month is the deadline for the first draft. Actually, I can negotiate with my supervisor to cancel it. Nevertheless, I feel so guilty because I took him so much time to read and comment on the outline again and again. I also took my friends time to do the trial questionnaire. After that, all were in no use. I must have been more careful check all the essential information before choosing a topic…
Certainly, I have to work harder now to find out a new topic and do research on it. It will take a lot of time. Moreover, I am not sure that I can hand in the research paper on time.
It is really a big lesson for me.
Top answer
Highlighted the parts you need to fix. Adding more details (like dialogues or events) will help. Chibi Felling guilty!!!
- Highlighted the parts you need to fix.
- Adding more details (like dialogues or events) will help.
- Chibi Felling guilty!!!
- It is really my fault not to prepare things carefully… I chose a topic that I found very interesting and was engaged in .
- I worked fairly hard to find out the way to develop it as creativity as possible.
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Highlighted the parts you need to fix.
Adding more details (like dialogues or events) will help.
Adding more details (like dialogues or events) will help.
ChibiFelling guilty!!!
It is really my fault not to prepare things carefully…
I chose a topic that I found very interesting and was engaged in. I worked fairly hard to find
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Thank you very much, Julielai. I am sure I can learn from your comments.
Regards,
Regards,
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