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Chibi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Hi beloved members!

Could you please edit this piece of writing. Moreover, I have a question, how can I turn this free writing into narative writing - a kind of academic writing. Thank you very much!

Felling guilty!!!

It is really my fault not to prepare things carefully…

I chose a topic that I found very interesting and was engaged in. I worked fairly hard to find out the way to develop it as creativity as possible. At first, I tended to do a very simple research, so I did write down a very simple outline. But then, I found that the outline did not fulfill all my ideas. I spent time doing it again and again for a better one. Thanks to my supervisor’s comments and suggestions, the outline of my research has been much improved. It may not be perfect, but it seems okay with the topic. I cannot say that I have read a lot of books on the topic but some. I find them interesting and inspiring. Now I am able to start to write the first draft, I think.

However, one thing suddenly happened when I began to conduct a survey. I must admit that it was very difficult for me to accomplish the questionnaire for students and interview questions for teachers. At last, I could manage to deliver these things. Exactly at that time I found out the program in mainstream classes are totally different from the program in . It means that my survey has no population to cover and my research will be out of need. The only way to save the situation is to change the topic; however, the 19th of this month is the deadline for the first draft. Actually, I can negotiate with my supervisor to cancel it. Nevertheless, I feel so guilty because I took him so much time to read and comment on the outline again and again. I also took my friends time to do the trial questionnaire. After that, all were in no use. I must have been more careful check all the essential information before choosing a topic…

Certainly, I have to work harder now to find out a new topic and do research on it. It will take a lot of time. Moreover, I am not sure that I can hand in the research paper on time.

It is really a big lesson for me.
  

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Highlighted the parts you need to fix. Adding more details (like dialogues or events) will help. Chibi Felling guilty!!!

  • Highlighted the parts you need to fix.
  • Adding more details (like dialogues or events) will help.
  • Chibi Felling guilty!!!
  • It is really my fault not to prepare things carefully… I chose a topic that I found very interesting and was engaged in .
  • I worked fairly hard to find out the way to develop it as creativity as possible.
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Highlighted the parts you need to fix.

Adding more details (like dialogues or events) will help.
ChibiFelling guilty!!!

It is really my fault not to prepare things carefully…

I chose a topic that I found very interesting and was engaged in. I worked fairly hard to find
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Thank you very much, Julielai. I am sure I can learn from your comments.

Regards,

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