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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Hi all would u pls help me writing this email
Dear colleagues,
Reference to the HR department call for strategic planning for the Administration Departments Heads dated..., and as per the administration departments heads' meeting with the administration gen mgr and the HR gen mgr dated february 11, 2016 which resulted in the preparation process for modifying the departments heads job description, kindly note that the recruitment department recommends to postpone such call for strategic planning as the implementation of the job description modification should be prior for any strategic planning.
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Reference to the HR department call for strategic planning for the Administration Departments Heads dated..., and as per the administration departments heads' meeting with the administration gen mgr and the HR gen mgr dated february 11, 2016 which resulted in the preparation process for modifying the departments heads job description, kindly note that the recruitment department recommends to postpone such call for strategic planning as the implementation of the job description modification should be prior for any strategic planning.
Reagrds
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Your memo is too full of useless verbiage. No one will bother to read it. Your colleagues all know what has transpaired in the meetings.
- Your memo is too full of useless verbiage.
- No one will bother to read it.
- Your colleagues all know what has transpaired in the meetings.
- Just be kind to all readers and do this: Dear colleagues, The recruitment department recommends postponing strategic planning until the job descriptions have been modified.
- Regards,
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Your memo is too full of useless verbiage. No one will bother to read it. Your colleagues all know what has transpaired in the meetings. Just be kind to all readers and do this:
Dear colleagues,
The recruitment department recommends postponing strategic planning until the job descriptions have been modified.
Regards,
Dear colleagues,
The recruitment department recommends postponing strategic planning until the job descriptions have been modified.
Regards,
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