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Didi83 Posted 15 years ago
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Hi All, Could you please proofread my email. I would like it to be professional as possible, since i am sending it to the CEO. Thank you!

Good Morning, All,

I hope this e-mail finds you well. I hope you all had a nice weekend.

Just a friendly reminder that we are scheduled for our weekly XXX meeting tomorrow, October 25, at 2pm EST. The call-In number is xxx.xxx.xxxx

Below, please follow the link to the adobe connect conference room:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

XXX, when you have a moment, could you please forward me an agenda for the meeting.

Thank you all for your time and consideration.

Thank you,

XXX
  

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do not worry, no one will call. However, the original sounded too smarmy to be professional. Dear All, Please be advised that the weekly MI simulator meeting is scheduled for tomorrow, October 25, at 2pm EST.

— JohnParis

  • do not worry, no one will call.
  • However, the original sounded too smarmy to be professional.
  • Dear All, Please be advised that the weekly MI simulator meeting is scheduled for tomorrow, October 25, at 2pm EST.
  • The call-In number is *** *** xxxx.
  • Follow the link to the adobe connect conference room: xx Rachel, could you please forward me the agenda for the meeting ?
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I thought there was a bit too much information there...do not worry, no one will call.

However, the original sounded too smarmy to be professional.

Dear All,


Please be advised that the weekly MI simulator meeting is scheduled for tomorrow, October 25, at 2pm EST. The call-In number is *** *** xxxx.

Follow the link to the adobe connect conference room:
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Thank you so much, greatly appreciated!
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