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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Hi all Appreciate if you could help me to correct my grammar in this letter.Tq

To,
Foreigners Registration Officer / SDPO
Dadar & Nagar Haveli(U.T.)
Silvassa

Ref. :- Your show cause notice dated 25/07/13 regarding ‘c’ form information

Respected Sir,
We refer to your notice relating ‘C’ Form sr. no. 056 Dated 11/07/13 in respect of foreigner Mr. ONO TAKASHI,
Mr. ONO TAKASHI was arrived in hotel dated 11/07/13 at 20.33pm for 5 days but for sum company work hi extend his stay for more 5 days. But apparently we did not inform to your office
I would like to apologize for the mistake that we have made. & in future we will be more alert regarding same matter.
We hope no disciplinary action will be taken against us as we already did the assessment. We assure you that this will not happen again.

Thanking You
Yours Faithfully

For Hotel Excellency
Altaf Karani
General Manager

Dated : 30/07/13
  

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We are writing regarding your notice to us regarding the ‘C’ Form sr. no. 056 Dated 11/07/13 in the case of a foreigner, Mr.

  • We are writing regarding your notice to us regarding the ‘C’ Form sr.
  • no.
  • 056 Dated 11/07/13 in the case of a foreigner, Mr.
  • ONO TAKASHI, Mr.
  • 33 pm for a 5-day stay.
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We are writing regarding your notice to us regarding the ‘C’ Form sr. no. 056 Dated 11/07/13 in the case of a foreigner, Mr. ONO TAKASHI,
Mr. ONO TAKASHI arrived at our hotel on 11/07/13 at 20.33 pm for a 5-day stay. Due to his work, he had to extend his stay by more 5 days. But apparently we did not inform to your office
I would like to apologize for the mistake that we made. In the fu

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