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Rajagopal Posted 15 years ago
Hi
how is my attempt to write a poem?
If u can't love me..
pls try to hate me..
i tell the reason y to hate me.
if u can get it u wil luv me..
on the either u pls hate me..
if u will hate me..
u will think me..
i can onli luv u..
never i can hate u..
to wherever u go..
i come there with u..
all these i do..
bcoz i luv u..
and for these sake
u pls hate me..
i will fall as ur shadow
wen the ticks too go narrow..
the blink of ur eye..
it shows
the stars those
twinkle in the sky..
this puts my face in smile
but keeps my eyes too wide
for this sake
u pls hate me..
ur song in sollow ..
sounds so like sparrow..
i need it to borrow..
to keep off my sorrow..
to love is not feasible..
to hate is then ur possible..
if hate is no possible..
my state is so horrible..
my last drop of blood says.."Love you dear"..
and so hate me..to hear those words..
after u hate for all these reasons..
there comes a season..
we both with hands together..
go round and round..
till there comes new sound..
none will be there to bound..
our love will never get wound.
we get wed in heaven
to live in peace..
till the birth of seven
If u can't love me..
pls try to hate me..
i tell the reason y to hate me.
if u can get it u wil luv me..
on the either u pls hate me..
if u will hate me..
u will think me..
i can onli luv u..
never i can hate u..
to wherever u go..
i come there with u..
all these i do..
bcoz i luv u..
and for these sake
u pls hate me..
i will fall as ur shadow
wen the ticks too go narrow..
the blink of ur eye..
it shows
the stars those
twinkle in the sky..
this puts my face in smile
but keeps my eyes too wide
for this sake
u pls hate me..
ur song in sollow ..
sounds so like sparrow..
i need it to borrow..
to keep off my sorrow..
to love is not feasible..
to hate is then ur possible..
if hate is no possible..
my state is so horrible..
my last drop of blood says.."Love you dear"..
and so hate me..to hear those words..
after u hate for all these reasons..
there comes a season..
we both with hands together..
go round and round..
till there comes new sound..
none will be there to bound..
our love will never get wound.
we get wed in heaven
to live in peace..
till the birth of seven
Top answer
Honestly? It is pretty boring, Rajagopal. -- A Red Red Rose by Robert Burns O my Luve's like a red, red rose That's newly sprung in June; O my Luve's like the melodie That's sweetly played in tune.
- Honestly?
- It is pretty boring, Rajagopal.
- -- A Red Red Rose by Robert Burns O my Luve's like a red, red rose That's newly sprung in June; O my Luve's like the melodie That's sweetly played in tune.
- As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a' the seas gang dry: Till a' the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi' the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o' life shall run.
- And fare thee weel, my only Luve, And fare thee weel awhile!
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Honestly? It is pretty boring, Rajagopal. How do you think yours compares with this nice love poem?--
A Red Red Rose
by Robert Burns
O my Luve's like a red, red rose
That's newly sprung in June;
O my Luve's like the melodie
That's sweetly played in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still,
A Red Red Rose
by Robert Burns
O my Luve's like a red, red rose
That's newly sprung in June;
O my Luve's like the melodie
That's sweetly played in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still,
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Red Red Rose is nice to hear, and i just tried one out. I don't expect it to be so good as i know, how my language is. Will try to improve, if you all guide me.
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raja...write some poem about happy family.
i want to read louder give all friend hear your poem...
i want to read louder give all friend hear your poem...
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