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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Hi!
Hi! Long Time No See!
Finally graduating, I can now start writing dairies. I decided to write them before but I was stopped by busyness a few days after I started writing them.Ha!Ha!
Could anybody correct them for me?
Many thanks in advance.
19 NOV 2009 Thurs Making Chocolate fruit
Today, I tried to make some chocolate fruit to sell so that I could earn some money. However, I was at lost to sell them. It’s because I only succeeded to make chocolate stick well and beautifully into grapes, among the four types of fruit I bought, honeydew, bananas, papayas and grapes.
That made me lose a lot of money. However, I think it worth. It’s because I got a precious lesson from it-- I should start from making a little when making new food, so that not to lose too much money, no matter how easy the food is.
Finally graduating, I can now start writing dairies. I decided to write them before but I was stopped by busyness a few days after I started writing them.Ha!Ha!
Could anybody correct them for me?
Many thanks in advance.
19 NOV 2009 Thurs Making Chocolate fruit
Today, I tried to make some chocolate fruit to sell so that I could earn some money. However, I was at lost to sell them. It’s because I only succeeded to make chocolate stick well and beautifully into grapes, among the four types of fruit I bought, honeydew, bananas, papayas and grapes.
That made me lose a lot of money. However, I think it worth. It’s because I got a precious lesson from it-- I should start from making a little when making new food, so that not to lose too much money, no matter how easy the food is.
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