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Innna_binnna Posted 19 years ago
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0Hi! My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum. I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed. Now I have wtitten already two times for the last three days and I have not received even a simple answer. I do not understand. I saw that there are many ather people who have not received the help thy asked for in this forum, and still others who got more than five replys. I really need somebody to read and tell me my mistakes or to give me some ideas so I can improve my letter. This should be a short application letter, because afterwards I have to add two pages of explanation on my motivation. I really hope that there is somebofdy to help and I thank him/her a lot!02br
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00Dear Sirs,02br
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00I am exciting to be applying for the Master program ….. and joining Your academic team. I have first heard about this program from a college and friend of mine, ……, who is now completing it. I have got interested and informed myself further from Your Internet site. 02br
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00I am very enthusiastic about the opportunity which Your program gives to young specialists from different fields to join, learn, and work together for the solving of Economical, Social and Ecological problems. I especially like the international background of this study, the practical training, the team work, and the great variety of areas in which I can in future apply the combined knowledge of science, technology and resource management. 02br
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00During my years of study in Bulgaria, USA, and Germany I have showed myself as a motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. I thrive on overcoming challenges. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can.02br
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00 I am excited by the opportunity to join an academic group where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm. 02br
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00My CV and my Motivation letter, enclosed herewith, contain additional information about me, my experience and interests02br
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00Thanking you for your attention.02br
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00 I look forward to receiving Your positive reply. For further questions, please, feel free to connect with me at any time. 02br
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00Yours faithfully,0-
  

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0Hi Inna,02br 02br 01font 00Hi! My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum. I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed.

  • 0Hi Inna,02br 02br 01font 00Hi!
  • My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum.
  • I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed.
  • Now I have wtitten already two times for the last three days and I have not received even a simple answer.
  • I do not understand.
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0Hi Inna,02br
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01font00Hi! My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum. I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed. Now I have wtitten already two times for the last three days and I have not received even a simple answer. I do not understand. 00It's simply that there is too much work
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0Hi Clive! Thank You very much for your help! I wish you a great day!02br
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00Ina0-

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