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0Hi! My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum. I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed. Now I have wtitten already two times for the last three days and I have not received even a simple answer. I do not understand. I saw that there are many ather people who have not received the help thy asked for in this forum, and still others who got more than five replys. I really need somebody to read and tell me my mistakes or to give me some ideas so I can improve my letter. This should be a short application letter, because afterwards I have to add two pages of explanation on my motivation. I really hope that there is somebofdy to help and I thank him/her a lot!02br02br00Dear Sirs,02br02br00I am exciting to be applying for the Master program ….. and joining Your academic team.  I have first heard about this program from a college and friend of mine, ……, who is now completing it. I have got interested and informed myself further from Your Internet site. 02br02br00I am very enthusiastic about the opportunity which Your program gives to young specialists from different fields to join, learn, and work together for the solving of Economical, Social and Ecological problems. I especially like the international background of this study, the practical training, the team work, and the great variety of areas in which I can in future apply the combined knowledge of science, technology and resource management. 02br02br00During my years of study in Bulgaria, USA, and Germany I have showed myself as a motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. I thrive on overcoming challenges. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can.02br02br00 I am excited by the opportunity to join an academic group where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm. 02br02br00My CV and my Motivation letter, enclosed herewith, contain additional information about me, my experience and interests02br02br00Thanking you for your attention.02br02br00 I look forward to receiving Your positive reply.  For further questions, please, feel free to connect with me at any time. 02br02br00Yours faithfully,0-

Clive · Accepted Answer

0Hi Inna,02br
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01font00Hi! My name is ina, and I am almost new in this forum. I wrote first in 2004 and I was very surprised and happy to receive so quicly the help I needed. Now I have wtitten already two times for the last three days and I have not received even a simple answer. I do not understand. 00It's simply that there is too much work and not enough people to do it all. Look at how much text is posted here for editting. It takes a long time to review and correct long texts. Don't forget that we are all unpaid volunteers. In addition, correcting long texts is much less interesting to most people.01font00 I saw that02font00 there are many ather people who have not received the help thy asked for in this forum, and still others who got more than five replys. 00Usually, because their post was short and interesting. 00I really need somebody to read and tell me my mistakes or to give me some ideas so I can improve my letter. This should be a short application letter, because afterwards I have to add two pages of explanation on my motivation. I really hope that there is somebofdy to help and I thank him/her a lot!02font02br
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00I'll try. Please read carefully to find my changes.02br
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00Best wishes, Clive02br
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01font00Dear Sirs,02font02br
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01font00I am exciting to be applying for the Master program ….. and at the prospect of joining your academic team. I first heard about this program from a college and friend of mine, ……, who is now completing it. I became interested and obtained information from your Internet site. 02font02br
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01font00I am very enthusiastic about the opportunity which your program gives to young specialists from different fields to join, learn, and work together for the solution of economic, social and ecological problems. I especially like the international background of this field study, the practical training, the team work, and the great variety of areas in which I can in future apply my combined knowledge of science, technology and resource management. 02font02br
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01font00During my years of study in Bulgaria, USA, and Germany I have shown myself as a motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. I thrive on overcoming challenges. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can.02font02br
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01font00 I am excited by the opportunity to join an academic group where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm. 02br
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01font00My CV and my motivation letter, enclosed herewith, contain additional information about me, my experience and interests02font02br
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01font00Thank you for your attention.02font01font00 I look forward to receiving your positive reply. For further questions, please feel free to contact me at any time. 02font02br
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01font00Yours sincerely,02font0-

Innna_binnna · Answer

0Hi Clive! Thank You very much for your help! I wish you a great day!02br
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