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Saltukhan Posted 19 years ago
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hey people



Experience-1


Hey people please check these sentences and fix them. i need some help about this point.

Eti Çelik A.S. ( Internship )


Eti Çelik is a supplier industry which produces Ford items.


I had completed my first compulsory internship period. This was including workshop


trainings. The aim of the internship was to learn workshop machines such as lathe,


cutting, miling cutter. 15 days.




Experience-2


Selcen Chemicals Blacksea Region Office ( Data Processor)


The office distrubutes Selcen chemical paints to Turkey’s blacksea region.


I had made out invoices, run the inventory records. 30 days




Experience-3


Radim Radiator ( Internship )


Radim produces panel radiators which is made by stainless steel. The firm is a well


known manufacturer on stainless steel processing. My internship is continuing still. I am improving my management skills in Radim. 15 days ( continuing)
  

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Hi, Here are some suggested changes. S. ( Internship ) Eti Çelik manufactures items for Ford.

— Clive

  • Hi, Here are some suggested changes.
  • S.
  • ( Internship ) Eti Çelik manufactures items for Ford.
  • I completed my first compulsory internship period here.
  • My work included workshop training.
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Hi,

Here are some suggested changes.



Experience-1


Eti Çelik A.S. ( Internship )


Eti Çelik manufactures items for Ford.


I completed my first compulsory internship period here. My work included
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thanks Clive

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