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00It’s not me.02br
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00It has been you all along.02br
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00My heart is not mine02br
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00when it beats for you.02br
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00My breath is not mine02br
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00when it breathes for you.02br
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00The scarlet letter that I sent02br
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00was written with blood 02br
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00shed for you.02br
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00The blue bells that I hold02br
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00have been grown02br
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00in the garden of love for you. 02br
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00It’s not me.02br
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00It has always been about you.02br
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00The tears that roll down 02br
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00my eyes are in your absence.02br
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00The sighs that I bear02br
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00are in agony of your separation.02br
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00The smiles that have disappeared02br
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00are because of your torture.02br
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00Now that I sleep down here02br
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00is the result of your negligence.0-
  

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0 Friends, please take time to atleast write a line when you come to read the poem. Thank you. 0-

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0 Friends, please take time to atleast write a line when you come to read the poem. Thank you. 0-
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0Welcome back, Anita! I haven't seen you here for a long time. Have you been somewhere interesting?02br
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00I'm not sure about the last few lines - I've emboldened the phrases that aren't quite idiomatic:01blockquote
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0Thanks Mr.P.Was away to my home country for my brother's wedding. Very very interesting indeed!050010id2
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0 Thanks Mr.P.Was away to my home country for my brother's wedding. Very very interesting indeed!05000 030src/emoticons/emotion-2.gif
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I've always enjoyed reading your poems , dear Anita , and surely this beauty is no less than the previous ones , bless you Girl . When the lines seem talking , this I call POETRY .
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