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00This is usually a common goal among all the cultures, and each culture has a different way on how to achieve that goal. Looking back throughout history to the present data the world has been viewed obsessed with beauty. North Americans have been viewed as the trend setters for the rest of the world. From the glamour of the 00 celebrities to the fair skinned; small waised supermodels. Many cultures fail to realize that beauty comes in all shapes and sizes. 010200 is largest user and exported for skin lighteners. Fair skin in 010200 means beautiful women with a better chance to obtain a job, a husband and wealth. In contrast to a dark skinned women who would be at major disadvantages in the Indian community. This is just one of the examples of a major beauty adjustment that people go through to fit in their cultures. In other cultures the need to have “Ideal beauty” occurs in a more extreme measure. Thoughtout history, individuals, especially young girls have modified the physical structure of their bodies in order to achieve their Ideal beauty. Women are ready to face any skeletal modifications that are considered for beauties are footbinding, neck stretching and corseting. 02br
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00Foot binding is one of the most famous Chinese traditions which was started in 1000 and outlawed in 1912. This Chinese custom started during the time of T’ang Dynasty ruler Li Yu, who was gifted dancer, she bind her feet in white silk cloth to make the tips of her feet will look like the points of a moon sickle. This custom was only performed on young girls between the ages of five to seven. These young girls were forced to follow this custom in order to get smaller feet. The main purpose of this custom was to make their feet as small as possible, so they can attract men. Basically this is performed so that girl can acquire beauty, marriageability and sex. However, when parents are performing this foot binding custom on their children, they should think about how much pain and suffering they will be going though because the procedure of this custom is started by wrapping their feet in tight bandages, so their feet want be able to grow. Hence, during this foot binding procedure, they will be binding and breaking bones, and putrification of the flesh of the feet. However, due to this some physical problems are created. For example: paralysis, gangrene, infection, muscle atrophy and the most common crippled gait. The symptoms of these physical problems are exposed in first few months or years of foot binding. In the beginning of the foot binding, their will be pain and bleeding and after that formation of pus. 02br
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00 00The custom of neck stretching is being performed in small villages and countries since long time till this day. Pandanug is one of the rare and strange feminine beauty place. This place is located is located near the Laikaw, near the border of 010200. This custom is performed on girls when they are five to six years old to achieve longer necks for beauty, so they can attract men. Before starting this custom, the rituals are performed. In these rituals, the neck of participant is smeared and massaged for several hours to avoid bruises from the rings. The first ring that is placed is made of bronze, so the soreness of neck could be prevented. They will be adding rings after every two years until their marriage.00 00However by doing this neck is modified. For example: deformation of cervical vertebrae and atrophy of the neck muscle. The average centimeter for every neck stretching women will be twenty-five cm. These neck rings are their whole life because if they are removed after long period of time, the person would suffocate and would face some serious physical problems or die without neck support. Hence, in this small village Padaung, the women are punished by removing their rings, so they would suffer severely for their deeds. 02br
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00 00Corsets were one of the most fashionable garments to wear in 1600 to 1920’s. Women during that time never left their house without wearing them. Corsets are commonly used to slim the body and emphasis a curve figure, so men can put can easy put their hand around. This procedure is performed on girls at the age of seven. These corsets are made up of steel or whalebone to get smaller waist. A person can reduce back pain or any problems that is related to back. They are also used to maintain curvy figure without using any cosmetic surgery, dieting and sliming drugs. Even though, corseting has some advantages it’s also have some disadvantages if a person prefer on wearing corsets for daily uses. The problems that can be created by this garment are respiratory distress and organ displacement such as diaphragm, liver, stomach, color and small intestines. There are some sever disease which are caused by using this garment, for example, 00tuberculosis, constipation, corset liver, and skeletal deformity.01b00 02b00Corseting can also affect by modifying skeleton system by reducing the surface area of ribcage, which would reduce breathing capacity for a person. This may also lead to internal bleeding and facture of the ribs. 02br
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00In conclusion, based on the fact that are mentioned above one can easily determine that even though women had lot of ways to make them look beautiful, they always choose painful ways to achieve that goal. For instance, In Chinese tradition if a girl or woman has smallest feet than that person will be considered as most beautiful than another girls.00 00Since than they people started performing binding their feet so they can attract men. The same goes for neck stretching and corseting, where women and young girls are placing themselves in to a risks that can cause them some serious deceases or permanent damage to body.00 02br
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