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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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hey how i could phrase:

Last quarter at UC Davis I felt I could have done better considering my circumstances of having an injury before the finals on my dominant hand which required a surgery.
  

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It is alright, but it's very long. It might be better to break it up a little. I felt I could have done better during my last quarter at UC Davis, as I'd had an injury which required a surgery on my dominant hand right before finals.

  • It is alright, but it's very long.
  • It might be better to break it up a little.
  • I felt I could have done better during my last quarter at UC Davis, as I'd had an injury which required a surgery on my dominant hand right before finals.
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It is alright, but it's very long. It might be better to break it up a little.

I felt I could have done better during my last quarter at UC Davis, as I'd had an injury which required a surgery on my dominant hand right before finals.

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