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Hitchhiker Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Hey guys, I heard about this website and thought you might be able to help
No secret here, my English is terrible. I'm writing up the BIO for this website you may have heard of.. Corrections would be appreciated, thanks to all!
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EnglishForward.com was founded in November of 2002 and hasn't stopped growing since. It is now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, striving to help people learn the English language.
We pride ourselves on having developed a friendly and non-confrontational environment. EnglishForward owes it's success to a team of experienced teachers, moderators and volunteers.
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EnglishForward.com was founded in November of 2002 and hasn't stopped growing since. It is now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, striving to help people learn the English language.
We pride ourselves on having developed a friendly and non-confrontational environment. EnglishForward owes it's success to a team of experienced teachers, moderators and volunteers.
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com was founded in November 2002 and has been growing ever since. It is now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, providing a supportive and friendly environment in which people can learn, practice, and master the English language. We pride ourselves on the welcoming and non-confrontational environment in our forums.
- com was founded in November 2002 and has been growing ever since.
- It is now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, providing a supportive and friendly environment in which people can learn, practice, and master the English language.
- We pride ourselves on the welcoming and non-confrontational environment in our forums.
- EnglishForward owes its success to a team of experienced teachers, moderators, and volunteers, and to the thousands of users who have made it their English-learning home and become members.
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Here's my go:
EnglishForward.com was founded in November 2002 and has been growing ever since. It is now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, providing a supportive and friendly environment in which people can learn, practice, and master the English language.
We pride ourselves on the welcoming and non-confrontational environment in our forums. EnglishF
EnglishForward.com was founded in November 2002 and has been growing ever since. It is now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, providing a supportive and friendly environment in which people can learn, practice, and master the English language.
We pride ourselves on the welcoming and non-confrontational environment in our forums. EnglishF
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Well, my only comment is on the switch to 1st person from 3rd person in the 1st sentence, second paragraph.
It would be better to write it consistently in 3rd person or, for more personal and friendly tone, in 1st person.
If you all agree, I would make a stab at a re-write...
It would be better to write it consistently in 3rd person or, for more personal and friendly tone, in 1st person.
If you all agree, I would make a stab at a re-write...
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Yup that makes sense to me. I prefer 1st person - what about you, Hitch? "we" or "it"?
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It's for the EnglishForward 'user' - so I guess:
EnglishForward.com was founded in November 2002 and has been growing ever since. It's now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, providing a supportive and friendly environment in which people can learn, practice, and master the English language.
The goal being to provide a welcoming and non-confrontati
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Here's my contribution. I removed the redundancy in the first and second paragraphs, and puffed it up a bit.
EnglishForward.com was founded in November 2002 and has been growing ever since. It's now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, providing a welcoming, supportive, non-confrontational and friendly environment in which people learn, practice, and master the En
EnglishForward.com was founded in November 2002 and has been growing ever since. It's now the world's largest EFL / TEFL social network community, providing a welcoming, supportive, non-confrontational and friendly environment in which people learn, practice, and master the En
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