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Daden1789 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Hey can someone look over these sentences

After the attack, Lawson and his crew first had to dodge many Japanese planes while also trying to save gas. They got away easily which surprised Lawson. Their plane crashed in water. After a couple of difficult minutes all the men reached land. They did not know if the land was occupied by the Japanese. It was occupied by Chinese. They had to travel from town to town and village to village trying to run from the Japanese. They spent people days without medical attention or food. Finally, they reached a hospital after many days of suffering. They also healed at the hospital except for Lawson. He had to get his leg amputated because he could not take the pain of the doctors cutting death flesh from his leg. They finally got to a plane in the city of . They met and his crew there. told him that the raid were successful. All of the B-25 planes had hit their target. The only bad thing was that the Japanese had captured one of the crews. They were finally going home after a month of many hardships and suffering.
  
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