Here's my essay on the topic: " It is more important to be healthy than to be rich." Could you read it and tell me what mistake I made? What do you think about the essay?

A person should try to be healthy rather than trying to be wealthy. If you have a lot of money but you cannot get out of the hospital bed to spend that money, what is the point of getting rich anyway? I think that no amount of money should be enough to compensate for your malfunction kidney or your mental disorder. The price you pay if you have to exchange the proper function of your physics and mental to get more money in your bank account is too high for you to risk. Moreover, I believe that we can live a happy life without being rich. Money cannot buy love and happiness. We may have to wear cheap clothes and eat low-priced food every day but we can still be fulfilled if we have our royal friends, our beloved family and our respectful partner around . These are the most crucial aspects of our life that decide whether we will be happy or not, and these aspects do not depend much on how much money you make, and may even somehow depend on your mental health. In conclusion, being healthy physically and mentally is more essential than getting wealthy.