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Here is my original text, and I want to re-word

Here is my original text, and I want to re-word but its so difficult to do because I cant say in different ways for exemple there no other words for non-formal education, flexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelter.

Most of the NGOs providing non-formal education to working children to eradicate child labourers or even to who have never been enrolled in school and those who are dropouts from school. NGOs offers flexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelter, skill training are some of the initiatives taken by NGOs even though the approaches of NGOs vary. NGOs reject the teacher-centred strategies (at least theoretically) and follow student-centred pedagogy. NGO schools don’t give homework burden for children. There is no tuition and exam fees and NGOs provide books, pencils and other stationeries to children. Flexibility in school hours helps many children to combine their work and school attendance.

All NGO programmes featured in this study have a pedagogical or educational component. The large majority of the children involved in the programs do attend school (educational programs), many clearly articulated that it is work that enables them to attend school and carry out family responsibilities. For children under this study, learning opportunity in NGO schools was their only or second chance of education.
  

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for example there no other words for non-formal education, flexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelter. — But it is unnecessary to find any alternative words for these in your text. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out extra words.

— Mister Micawber

  • for example there no other words for non-formal education, flexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelter.
  • — But it is unnecessary to find any alternative words for these in your text.
  • I have underlined some problem areas and struck out extra words.
  • Please try to fix them and post your revised text here: Most of the NGOs providing non-formal education to working children to eradicate child labourers or even to who have never been enrolled in school and those who are dropouts from school .
  • NGOs offers F lexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelte r, s kill training are some of the initiatives taken by NGOs , even though the approaches of NGOs vary.
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for example there no other words for non-formal education, flexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelter.— But it is unnecessary to find any alternative words for these in your text. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out extra words. Please try to fix them and post your revised text here:

Most of the NGOs providing
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Here is my text I want to change and dont look similar

Most of the NGOs provide non-formal education to working children to eradicate child labour or to a child who have never been enrolled in school and those who are dropouts. Flexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelterskill training are some of the initiatives taken by NGOs, eve
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Most of the NGOs provide non-formal education to working children to eradicate child labour or to children who have never been enrolled in school and those who are dropouts. Flexible school hours, life-oriented curriculum, counselling, family support, shelter, and skill training are some of the initiatives taken by NGOs, even though the approaches vary. NGOs reject
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