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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

here is my cover letter, i've tried my best. Could you help me, please?

0Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00Holder of a BTS Tourism00, 01i00(its a tourism operation program in university,diploma for pre-graduated, i dont know how to explain it)02i00 00I would wish to occupy an employment in your company. Currently in the search of an employment, I am particularly intersted by the post of crew.02br
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00Young, dynamic and motivated, I would highly like to begin in the active life. My dreaction of the reception, my taste of the contact with the customers, my availability, associated a good control of the data-processing tool will be, I hope for it, decisive qualities in your eyes.02br
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00I speak two foreign languages, French, English, and has an intermediate Spanish level. My resume which is enclosed, showing further information of my education, experience and background.02br
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00I believe working in your company will provide me with the challenging and innovotive enviroment that I am looking for. Having the direction of the human contacts, I developed a real sense of team sprit. Very organized and methodical, I will be able to adapt whatever my assignment. If my candidature interests you, I will be happy to meet you for a maintenance01i00.(I am not sure if i can say like this)02i02br
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00I am looking forward to meeting you to discuss my skills and interests further.Thank you for you time and consideration.02br
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00Sincerely,02br
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00Jasmine0-
  

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0 Jasmine ... Jasmine. When you write a cover letter, always stress what you can contribute to the company, and not what the company and do for you.

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0 Jasmine ... Jasmine. When you write a cover letter, always stress what you can contribute to the company, and not what the company and do for you. You're asking them to give you a job remember?0-
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1font00Thanks jay for giving your advice for my cover letter 05002font02br
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01font00If i take of the sentence which is "00I believe working in your company will provide me with the challenging and innotive enviroment that i am looking for01font00" all others are perferct en
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0Hi 茉莉花(=Jasmine)02br
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00The latter part of yours is good,however,you should reconsider the beginning part.02br
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01font00Dear Sir or Madam,02font02br
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01font00Nice to meet you.I am a holder of a BTS Tourism,It's my great honour to have this opportunity to apply a
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1font00Hi Hep. I dont think that I can say02font00 01font00"nice to meet you"02font00 01font00in the cover letter. I took your advise of 02font01font00starting my career.02font02br
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0 You're right Jasmine. Perhaps you want to use 'nice to meet you' only 01i00after 02i00you had an interview with an interviewer and you're sending him a thank you note.02br
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00There are actually plenty of resources out there giving you samples of cover letters of different flavour. Let me know if you can't find them.0-
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