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Wangqh2696122 Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
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Dear Tom,
How are you doing?
How happy I am to learn that your online shop is becoming increasingly prosperous! To diversify your commodities, I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.
Honestly, I made them myself. With a length of 10 cm and a width of 5 cm, all these knots are delicately woven, using choice silk and threads. As for the price, they are sold at an absolutely competitive price --only 10 dollars each.
In the eyes of Chinese culture, Chinese knots represent union, love and good luck. So, hopefully, these knots can serve as a cultural ambassador, bringing good luck to the peoples of both countries.
Should you have further questions, please feel free to contact me.
Li Hua
How are you doing?
How happy I am to learn that your online shop is becoming increasingly prosperous! To diversify your commodities, I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.
Honestly, I made them myself. With a length of 10 cm and a width of 5 cm, all these knots are delicately woven, using choice silk and threads. As for the price, they are sold at an absolutely competitive price --only 10 dollars each.
In the eyes of Chinese culture, Chinese knots represent union, love and good luck. So, hopefully, these knots can serve as a cultural ambassador, bringing good luck to the peoples of both countries.
Should you have further questions, please feel free to contact me.
Li Hua
Top answer
If you are addressing an acquaintance ('Dear Tom'), then be simpler and less stuffy: Dear Tom, How are you doing? How happy I am to learn that your online shop is making money! I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me ?
- If you are addressing an acquaintance ('Dear Tom'), then be simpler and less stuffy: Dear Tom, How are you doing?
- How happy I am to learn that your online shop is making money!
- I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me ?
- I make them myself.
- Ten cm long and 5 cm wide, all these knots are delicately woven, using choice silk threads .
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If you are addressing an acquaintance ('Dear Tom'), then be simpler and less stuffy:
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? How happy I am to learn that your online shop is making money!
I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me? I make them myself. Ten cm long and 5 cm wide, all these knots are
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? How happy I am to learn that your online shop is making money!
I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me? I make them myself. Ten cm long and 5 cm wide, all these knots are
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