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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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here in Michigan and here in the US

0I heard Obama said, "President Bush was so focused on the war in Iraq he lost sight of the problems that had been mounting 01b00here in Michigan and here in the US02b00".02br
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00Is this style common? and What effect does it create?02br
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0Sure. I'm not sure what you find odd about it.0-
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0 It emphasises the problems HERE - at home , as opposed to the focus being on foreign policy.0-
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0Thanks, GG and Optilang.02br
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00GG, Usually in writing, I see "In a state in the country". In this case, "in Michigan in the US"0-
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0Actually, it is written in a very good style. The focus is on showing the difference between concerns abroad and concerns at home. He doubled the emphasis on the problems at home, and could have intensified it even more by saying "here in Detroit, here in Michigan, and here in the US".0-
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0I am not an expert in rhetoric by any means, but I believe this is an example of 01i00anaphora02i00, defined by05000 as "the repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of successive phrases, clauses or lines." They go on to give the example of Churchill's famous speech: "we shall fight on the beaches, we shall fight on the landing grounds..." 02br
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0I think it also makes it clear that these problems are found both at a local level (in Michigan) and nationally throughout the US. so those are serious problems! It also makes the politician sound sympathetic to those specific local voters, while not forgetting the wider effects.0-
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0Thanks, Optilang, Gordon, GG, Delmobile and Nona. I get it now.0-
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01cite10New2grammar12cite10I heard Obama said, "President Bush was so focused on the war in Iraq12blockquote
10I heard Obama 01b00say ...02b0-
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0Thanks, Yong Liat. I agree with you.0-
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0I heard he sang a good song0-

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