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Mezzopiano Posted 6 years ago
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Here doesn't snow at all

I'm writing a letter describing how my area looks like. Please proofread it.

Here doesn't snow at all. If it does, the snow only lasts 1 hour max. I was in Minnesota in December 2017 so I know how it feels with snow and I don't like it. Too cold and the snow makes the road slippery, not fun.

  

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mezzopiano Here , it doesn't snow at all. If it does, the snow only lasts one hour max. I was in Minnesota in December 201 7, so I know how it feels with snow and I don't like it.

— Teechr

  • mezzopiano Here , it doesn't snow at all.
  • If it does, the snow only lasts one hour max.
  • I was in Minnesota in December 201 7, so I know how it feels with snow and I don't like it.
  • It’s t oo col d, and the snow makes the road slipper y - not fun.
  • Consider changing the first sentence to something like: Here, it hardly ever snows.
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Here, it doesn't snow at all. If it does, the snow only lasts one hour max. I was in Minnesota in December 2017, so I know how it feels with snow and I don't like it.

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