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Prple Posted 13 years ago
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Here a song for you, showing my emotions towards you guys best

Hi, it the following sentence correct? "Here a song for you, showing my emotions towards you guys best"

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". However, it's possible that you mean to use "Here" as a kind of exclamation, in which case "is" is not required but you do need some sort of punctuation after "Here", at minimum a comma I would say. "showing my emotions towards you guys best" feels awkward to me ("best" feels a bit lost at the end).

— GPY

  • ".
  • However, it's possible that you mean to use "Here" as a kind of exclamation, in which case "is" is not required but you do need some sort of punctuation after "Here", at minimum a comma I would say.
  • "showing my emotions towards you guys best" feels awkward to me ("best" feels a bit lost at the end).
  • You could say "Here's a song for you that best shows my emotion towards you guys".
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The first part should probably read "Here is / Here's a song for you...". However, it's possible that you mean to use "Here" as a kind of exclamation, in which case "is" is not required but you do need some sort of punctuation after "Here", at minimum a comma I would say.

"showing my emotions towards you guys best" feels awkward to me ("best" feels a bit lost at the end). Yo
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PrpleHere a song for you, showing my emotions towards you guys best
This could be better.

Here's a song that shows how I feel about you guys.

I don't know why you used "best"; there are no other songs to compare it to, are there?

CJ
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