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Stevenukd Posted 18 years ago
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HER HEART

Dear Teachers,

1. Pete tried every way and did his best in order to win Susan's heart, and it went to nothing. She really makes him feel so heart-broken.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
  

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Stevenukd Dear Teachers, 1. Pete tried every way and did his best in order to win Susan's heart, and it went to nothing. She really makes him feel so heart-broken.

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  • Stevenukd Dear Teachers, 1.
  • Pete tried every way and did his best in order to win Susan's heart, and it went to nothing.
  • She really makes him feel so heart-broken.
  • - Is this natural to say?
  • Thanks very much to Teachers, Stevenukd.
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StevenukdDear Teachers,

1. Pete tried every way and did his best in order to win Susan's heart, and it went to nothing. She really makes him feel so heart-broken.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
Hi,

I would renove 'in order' and replace 'and it went to nothing' with 'to no av
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