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Tai Kim Yi Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Her hand is silky, moist and a bit cool

Hello,


May I ask if the following sentence is grammatically correct and sounds natural?


Emily’s hand is silky, moist and a bit cool, almost hiding inside Tim’s large hand.

(Tim is holding Emily’s hand.)


Many thanks,

K

  

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Tai Kim Yi May I ask if the following sentence is grammatically correct and sounds natural? I would like to be sure that you didn't mean "hidden" instead of "hiding". Moist hands are not thought very desirable.

  • Tai Kim Yi May I ask if the following sentence is grammatically correct and sounds natural?
  • I would like to be sure that you didn't mean "hidden" instead of "hiding".
  • Moist hands are not thought very desirable.
  • Also, the participial phrase seems tacked on because it does not follow from the main clause.
  • "
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Tai Kim YiMay I ask if the following sentence is grammatically correct and sounds natural?

I would like to be sure that you didn't mean "hidden" instead of "hiding". Moist hands are not thought very desirable. Also, the participial phrase seems tacked on because it does not follow from the main clause. You would have to mention how small her hand is to put

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