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Sun 94 Posted 15 years ago
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Her command of English
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Her command of English has shown steady improvement due to her desire to succeed. She is receptive to new challenges to reach her goals. Accordingly, her confidence in her ability to learn has increased. This was proven during our second semester when her grades improved. She is a mature, diligent and ambitious student who aspires to a career in an international organization.
Her command of English has shown steady improvement due to her desire to succeed. She is receptive to new challenges to reach her goals. Accordingly, her confidence in her ability to learn has increased. This was proven during our second semester when her grades improved. She is a mature, diligent and ambitious student who aspires to a career in an international organization.
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That looks OK to me, sun.
- That looks OK to me, sun.
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