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Snarf Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

...hence making...

"You are a well-liked man, hence making you very useful to me."

Can "hence" be used in that way?

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I suppose you could, but I wouldn’t. The sentence is fine without it.

  • I suppose you could, but I wouldn’t.
  • The sentence is fine without it.
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I suppose you could, but I wouldn’t. The sentence is fine without it.
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Not a good sentence.
Better is "You are a well-liked man, and hence you are very useful to me."

Clive
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Also, You are a well-liked man and hence very useful to me.
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What about this sentence?

You have always been good to everyone, hence making you a very well-liked man.

For that, would you say that it should be: "You have always been good to everyone, hence you are a very well-liked man"?
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Snarf"You have always been good to everyone, hence you are a very well-liked man"?
That has a comma splice. You need and to connect the clauses.
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Yes, I forgot about the "and."
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Broadly speaking, 'hence' should be followed by some fact that can be concluded from what has been said.

'Making . . . ' is not a good way to state a fact.

Clive
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CliveBroadly speaking, 'hence' should be followed by some fact that can be concluded from what has been said.'Making . . . ' is not a good way to state a fact.Clive
It's not? How come? If someone asked, "What makes him so smart?" and someone answered, "He has a very high I.Q.," it's the high I.Q., according to this person, that makes him smart. F
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Doesn't sound right.Emotion: smile

'Making him smart' sounds more adverb
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Oh, I think I get what you're saying now. But in the other example that I gave, I was, in fact, stating why he was liked by people, so the adverbial nature of "making" is justified, isn't it? How about a case like this?

He stole from the company a little more each year, hence making him one rich man.

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