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M131294 Posted 16 years ago
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In the media today, technology has become more advanced in general increasing the risk of an unhealthy lifestyle amongst teenagers.
Hi, I was wondering if it'll be okay if you could restructure this sentence for me? It'll be a great help. thanks
  

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Hello,

"The advanced media technologies encourage young people to live an unhealthy life."

I cannot guarantee that it is a grammatically ideal paraphrase, but

it can give you a hint of how you can restructure sentences.

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Victor
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