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Ben9108 Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Helping to simplify the email

Please help to simplify the email below before sending out. Thanks


Dear ABC

When I was informed an emergency case of units failure at XYW building, 10/F, I urged term contractor to provide a cost estimation for repairing the units to solicit user’s approval.

After my vetting, I found a problem of the cost estimation and requested term contractor to resubmit a quotation according to the contract rate. Therefore, it was found that the final cost of the purchase order was lower than the cost estimation.

Regards

Thomas

  

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Ben9108 Please help to simplify the email Dear ABC, After the unit failure on the 10th floor, XYW building, I asked the term contractor to provide a repair estimate. However, I found a problem in his estimate and asked him to resubmit according to the contract rate. Therefore, the final cost was lower than estimated.

  • Ben9108 Please help to simplify the email Dear ABC, After the unit failure on the 10th floor, XYW building, I asked the term contractor to provide a repair estimate.
  • However, I found a problem in his estimate and asked him to resubmit according to the contract rate.
  • Therefore, the final cost was lower than estimated.
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Ben9108Please help to simplify the email

Dear ABC,

After the unit failure on the 10th floor, XYW building, I asked the term contractor to provide a repair estimate. However, I found a problem in his estimate and asked him to resubmit according to the contract rate. Therefore, the final cost was lower than estimated.

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