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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Helping out a Foreigner
The following paragraph originally written by a student has been revised by me. Please help me correct it. Thanks a lot.
Helping out a Foreigner
When Jack went out for buying something to eat yesterday, he met a male foreigner who got lost in the street. Jack decided to step forward to help out the foreigner who actually came to Taiwan for the first time and intended to visit Taipei 101. Then, Jack gave directions to him and offered him some advice. He deeply appreciated Jack’s help and kindness. After Jack wished him a pleasant journey, they mutually said taking good care of oneself and said goodbye to each other. Jack and the male foreigner still keep in touch with each other, and they have become good friends.
Helping out a Foreigner
When Jack went out for buying something to eat yesterday, he met a male foreigner who got lost in the street. Jack decided to step forward to help out the foreigner who actually came to Taiwan for the first time and intended to visit Taipei 101. Then, Jack gave directions to him and offered him some advice. He deeply appreciated Jack’s help and kindness. After Jack wished him a pleasant journey, they mutually said taking good care of oneself and said goodbye to each other. Jack and the male foreigner still keep in touch with each other, and they have become good friends.
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contiluo When Jack went out for to bu y ing something to eat yesterday, he met a ( male ) foreigner who 'd got lost in the city. street. Jack decided to step forward to help out the foreigner who 'd actually c o me to Taiwan for the first time and who'd intended to visit Taipei 101.
- contiluo When Jack went out for to bu y ing something to eat yesterday, he met a ( male ) foreigner who 'd got lost in the city.
- street.
- Jack decided to step forward to help out the foreigner who 'd actually c o me to Taiwan for the first time and who'd intended to visit Taipei 101.
- Then, Jack gave him the right directions (to the famous landmark) to him and offered him some advice (and useful local information) .
- He deeply appreciated Jack’s help and kindness.
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contiluoWhen Jack went outforto buyingsomething to eat yesterday, he met a (male) foreigner who'd got lost in the city.street.Jack decided to step forward to help out the foreigner who'd actually come to Taiwan for the first time and who'd intended to visit Taipei 101.
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