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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Help writing Christmas card

Hi,

I am not one of the best in english grammer, and i am trying to write a christmas card to a part of my family from UK.

What i would like is some response on how i could make this short christmas card, better english grammer, and any other help or ideas, would also be loved.

My christmas card for now:
"Dear (Their names),

Hereby i wish you all a very Merry Christmas,
and a wonderful New Year.

I hope you all are well, and that you will get healthy trough the new year and the winther

Christmas Greetings
Johnny"

Thanks for the help
  

Top answer

Here is a simple, corrected version of your note, with a small suggestion on how to expand on your message. ) Dear (X, Y, Z): I would like to wish you all a very Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year. I hope you all are well and that you will enjoy the best of health and personal happiness during the coming year.

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  • Here is a simple, corrected version of your note, with a small suggestion on how to expand on your message.
  • ) Dear (X, Y, Z): I would like to wish you all a very Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year.
  • I hope you all are well and that you will enjoy the best of health and personal happiness during the coming year.
  • Christmas greetings, Johnny
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Here is a simple, corrected version of your note, with a small suggestion on how to expand on your message. ("Hereby" is too formal for a family letter.)

Dear (X, Y, Z):

I would like to wish you all a very Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year.

I hope you all are well and that you will enjoy the best of health and personal happiness during the coming year.

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