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Tomerco Posted 18 years ago
Business & Finance

Help with the wording

1font00Hi all, do you suppose the letter below is correct?02font02br
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00Dear madam02br
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00Further to our phone conversation (on the 21/04/08) I'm sorry to tell you that our company still did not recieve any reply from your staff.02br
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00***(company's name)*** sees it with a concern that our e-mails nor our messages are beening returnd lately and hopes it is a matter of miscommunication.02br
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00I would appreciate your fast react as we want to progress on and agree upon a collaboration under the stated term.02br
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00sincerely...0-
  

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— Feebs11

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01cite10tomerco12cite11font10Hi all, do you suppose the letter below is correct?12font12br
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0If you spoke to her on the phone, you know her name. Use it. 02br
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00Dear Ms. Smith:02br
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00Since our telephone conversation on 21 April 2008, I regret to tell you that our company has still not received any response from your staff. (Name) is concerned that neither our e-mail nor our voice messages are being returned. I hope it is simply a matter
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0Dear 01font01b00Feebs1102b02font00 and 01font01b00Grammer Geek02b02font00,02br
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00Thank you guys for the revising, I'm learning alot from you!02br
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00Will change the wording right away.02br
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00Cheers 05
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